Wednesday 2 November 2016

Doctor Dischord description

In Room Five our teacher Mrs Idle, has been reading us a book called The Phantom Tollbooth. We had to write a description about one of the characters in the setting. The picture from the book helped me write about it.


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Screech. “What’s that?” asked Milo as he opened the door of his car. “What’s what?” asked the Humbug, and Tock simultaneously
“That wagon over there,” said Milo. He crept over and looked through a crack in the  rotten door. There, sitting at a mouldy wooden table, was a dark figure stirring a dark green liquid in what looked like a flower pot.
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1 comment:

  1. Hey Blake, it's Coby here. I really like your description of Dr Dischord. I really like how you have put the setting that Dr Dischord is in. Would you like to have a look at my blog? http://awahonocobyw.blogspot.co.nz/
    From Coby

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